Here is some critique that I got back for my film on You Tube.
I took into account the second comment in particular, as my film did not have titles in the beginning.
As a result of this comment from the viewer, I was able to improve upon my piece by adding titles towards it. Although the changes made to the movie may have been subtle, and the comments I received were only on minor issues within the piece, the critique makes a big difference to the overall success and appeal of a film, as it is the consumer who will view the media product, and for whom it is designed, so if you are unwilling to accept their opinions, then you will never be able to construct a successful piece of media.
This comment from Harry Hough although not offering critique of my piece with regards to what I could improve, was helpful for me to ascertain whether or not the soundtrack I used was the correct one, or suitable for the style of piece I was creating. The answer by this comment amongst others was that this was a suitable song.
I also showed the short film to people who did not have access to a YouTube account. These people included Jennifer Davies, Diane Jolly, Thomas Meddings amongst others. I chose these three specific comments as I felt they were the most helpful in improving my film.
Diane Jolly stated 'I was uncertain at first what the film was about but I got the just of it once she was sitting sadly in the park. You should look at putting titles down because all films have them and I didn't see any at the start. Its just an idea but otherwise loved it'. This comment similarly to Samuel Cullis' highlighted the need for me to introduce titles to my film. Given that this had been highlighted twice, I immediately set about introducing titles to the start of the film. The effect was a much improved product.
Thomas Meddings stated 'It was positively depressing to watch. If making the viewer sad is what you were intending to do then you have succeeded. The part where she slits her wrist is really realistic. One thing you should make clearer is that she is his girlfriend and not her brother as wasn't clear'.
With this comment in mind, I showed clearly in the letter writing scene that she was of a romantic connection to the character by writing down 'My dearest Sam'. This comment was valid and extremely helpful to me when trying to improve upon my film.
Jennifer Davies stated 'I love the alternative storyline that you used. You were even able to keep the viewer intrigued throughout the journey where the events were not so exciting as the anxiety of finding out what would happen next kept me on my toes. The one thing that I would change is to make the soundtrack quieter when the main character is waking because I couldn't hear her gasp well'. This comment was interesting as was the first time I had actually picked up on the fact that the girls gasp was very difficult to hear. The comment was valid upon inspection and so I changed the end of the clip so the gasp could be heard more clearly. Although this alteration was subtle, the culmination of the many subtle changes as a result of audience feedback will help to make an altogether improved product.
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